W.A.L.T:Write about Guy Fawkes and how it is celebrated or you could write about what you did to celebrate Guy Fawkes
In the weekend i did Guy Fawkes at my uncle's house and it was my aunt's Birthday when I was holding the big 60 mm candle it has 7 shoot and it is loud and it shoots high when I took the first shot the dog ran inside and hid behind my uncle because she was scared
Dear kira I like the way you you talked about weekend and how you did fireworks with your family and i like the way you put in facts about Guy Fawkes but you need to work on putting more picture's on you slide like the actual person Guy Fawkes himself.
ReplyDeletenice work kira i like you photo and how you describe your work.
ReplyDeletenice work kira i like you photo and how you describe your work.
ReplyDeleteThis work is awesome.I like that you inserted interesting facts but next time try put in full stops and re-read your work but besides that this work is all good.
ReplyDeleteThis work is awesome.I like that you inserted interesting facts but next time try put in full stops and re-read your work but besides that this work is all good.
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