Hi Kira, I really enjoyed reading your story. I especially loved the way you described the moment when your uncle hit you - 'I was going to drop tears on the ring'. You have told your audience exactly what you wanted to say, with out simply saying I wanted to cry. I can't wait to read more of your writing.
Hi Kira, I really enjoyed reading your story. I especially loved the way you described the moment when your uncle hit you - 'I was going to drop tears on the ring'. You have told your audience exactly what you wanted to say, with out simply saying I wanted to cry. I can't wait to read more of your writing.
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