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Wednesday, 27 August 2014

Persuasive Planning Chart


WALT create a plan for persuasive text.

Success Criteria
Include my opinion (agree or disagree)
Give reasons for my opinion
discuss consequences that are caused by my reasons.

Statement: Humans are very good at looking after the sea and sea life.

My Opinion:I disagree
Reason 1:Because when we use the toilet and flash.It goes down to the sewage and transfers to the sea.
Reason 2:Some people make sea creatures extinct by mining in habitat.
Reason 3:Because when people go fishing near the dolphins they get trapped inside the net and they won't breath they will drawn.    
Consequences:We should not overfish because people think that the fish will grow again.
Consequences:The baby will not get to grow just like their mom and dad.
Consequences: When we catch a dolphin in a net it will drawn and won't survive.Conclusion: I disagree because people throw rubbish in the ocean so we should put up a sign and it says  NO LITTERING!!

Tuesday, 26 August 2014

legend story

why do sharks have lots of teeth
A Long long time ago there was a shark diving across the south pacific deep ocean.Then the shark went to ask naui for some teeth. When he got to nauis places He asked for teeth but naui said no. because he didn't want to and he was sad because naui didn't give him any sharp shiny teeth.Then the shark was sad because Nuia said no then he ran away with sadness tears running down his body . then Nuai the eel went off to get him because he felt sad for the poor shark.Then Naui caught up to the shark and said wait you can go to the kind  lady of the sea.Then he went off to see the lady of the sea.As he suddently power walked into the lady of the sea said how dears to enter my pond.Then the shark said sorry to disturb you i just came to ask of some teeth to eat and chew my delishos prey.Then the lady of the sea said are you really turst woruthey to look after these new amazing  teeth then the shark said yes i will take good care of them  and the lady of the sea said yes and granted him teeth. and when sharks are older they can have over 50,000 teeth in a lifetime and they have  layered of  rows, with 5 to 15 rows in both upper and lower jaws.    Cuse  thats why sharks have so many teeth when they older